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2018-04-13 提交的作品

老师您好！这是一款我自己构思的APP界面，主要是想提供一个可以让漫迷们与漫画家交流互动的平台。
自己遇到的主要问题是，做完之后不知道该怎么评价自己的作品，也不知该从哪里下手改良比较好。希望能够得到您的专业指点！非常感谢！

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孔晨Point_Vision

UI界面设计动效创意设计

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总评：
通篇看下来，作品还处在相对初级的阶段。很多细节问题，比如结尾的大字母“thanks”这个字体，就让整个作品显得不够精致。对界面的结构、板式、交互以及功能还不是非常理解。界面的细节问题，都在里面标注点评了。还是要多看优秀的作品，多看线上的APP、多尝试使用不同的APP产品，然后带着自己的思考去做。前期可以借鉴一些优秀的作品，但是也要加入自己的想法，融合设计。加油吧！

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