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这个页面主要作用是推这2款蒸烤箱，2个产品的卖点都在一个页面进行了阐述，整体做下来，感觉精致度不够，不知道是不是因为没有根据网格系统在做，所以初看还行，时间久了就觉得不耐看，色调选择上，是选择的接近烘焙的色调。也是品牌要求，需要暖色，需要场景，而进行设计的。

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ChiNa_威海_山岩

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2018-04-13 点评

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总评：
给我的感觉是一个半成品，然后用心程度上下版块也不是很一致，能力应该是有的，但是感觉不够仔细，很多地方的排版都不合理，另外整体页面的版块与版块之间的距离都有点挤。

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