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2018-04-01 提交的作品

老师你好，这是我上几天工作中所作一个活动页面，最终还是没有通过，我也不知道那里不对，谢谢老师能够指点。

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米田的天空

米田的天空

网页交互／界面视觉／品牌设计

2018-07-11 点评

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总评：
整体看上去有点零散，需要调整的是将其变得更为集中。

1）插画都很棒，可以考虑将标题放到插画里穿插处理
2）banner部分的标题，可以添加更多小细节
3）左右空间可以适当留空，呼吸感会更好

具体可以参考：http://huaban.com/pins/1605740705/

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