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2018-03-20 提交的作品

老师，您好，看过您的点评，说的很到位，这本画册产品放的很难看，封面也难看，完全不知道怎么下手改，请老师指教

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孙圣朝

孙圣朝

编排设计／画册／海报

2018-03-23 点评

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总评：
1、无效传播，没有重心。
2、信息编排没有逻辑，重新梳理逻辑。
3、由轻到重，由先到后先梳理清楚再设计。
4、去掉那些无谓的装饰，先做实用，再考虑好看。

做编排设计关键是理解和表达，不理解项目的根本诉求，
不了解用户的根本需求，
必然不可能做了出适合的设计。

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