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海外店铺，日资品牌，店铺要求日系风。做健康放仓季，所以画面的构思是想做开门囤货的感觉。整体要求促销。然后有日本元素。还望老师点评一二。谢谢

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整体感觉挺到位，有日系的味道，但是缺乏些日本风的灵动。什么是灵动呢？简单来说就是，需要创作些不规则的样式，可以在部分网页局部增加不一样的版式效果。

1、头部部分，将产品和环境的样式调整成一致效果。特别是考虑环境为红色时，对产品的是一点点红色的反射。
2、要增加变化，可以考虑在方方正正的木框上做变化，譬如有些形状的变化。
3、具体版式变化的方法，可参考以下这个日本站点 http://huaban.com/pins/1891017851/

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