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2018-05-04 提交的作品

总觉得还差点什么，希望老师指点一下。

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ChiNa_威海_山岩

ChiNa_威海_山岩

海报设计／电商设计／版式设计

2018-05-05 点评

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整体来说就是海报有点挤了，然后文字选择包括字体，包括位置，包括形式都有待改进

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