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嘟嘟利

2018-04-20 提交的作品

.怎么排版都很怪希望老师可以指点一下。
他的标头就是那样的

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孙圣朝

孙圣朝

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2018-04-23 点评

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总评：
1、整体版面没有呼吸的空间导致了阅读识别率降低。
2、主次层级关系模糊，对比不够明确。

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